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Post by cholzee on Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:59 am

paper and inkblots.

digging deep in the graveyard of emotions,
forcing myself to bury the thoughts of you.
could have done it earlier and avoid confusions,
but i can’t, i just can’t forget you.

drowning in complexity just to find a reason,
why i couldn’t tell you that it’s killing me.
i’m missing you and i’m suffocating in this prison,
now let me be the man i wanted to be.

tired of hiding in the shadows of my fear,
fed up of dealing with sentimental hunger.
all i really wanted was to have you near,
i wasn’t strong enough, i would like to ponder.

standing still to tell you finally,
if i get to turn away, i’d cut off my feet.
this man would surely die for you, gladly.
my love for you hasn’t altered a bit.


cholzee.2006




parang hindi ako no? hahaha! i've written this when i was in 3rd year college, year 2006 yon. i wasn't really planning to be emotional that moment.

i was doing a plate that night in my room. i finished my drawing in lead and i was about to do the inking. kaya lang sablay yung techpen ko, paglapat ko sa drawing nagblot yung ink! so badtrip! buti na lang may extra tracing paper pa ako. nakikinig ako non ng acoustic sessions ng saosin sa itunes.

then i decided to take a rest kaso i reached for the guitar instead. tas ayun na, i started scribbling. nadala ako sa pinakikinggan ko. i'm a huge fan of saosin kasi. anyway, nai-share ko lang tong naisulat ko.

it was intended to be a song sana kaya lang i didn't have the luxury of time para matapos. while reading, you'll realize na pang-secondhand serenade yung lyrics hehe! sa tingin ko lang naman.

ayun, kayo din guys share din kayo.
cheers!

\m/

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Post by dominick on Fri Jun 25, 2010 7:00 am

the poem is full of lurve...
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Post by cholzee on Fri Jun 25, 2010 10:19 am

yeah. its about a man na naghohold-back sa feelings nya.. then he realizes na he has to prove himself.

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Post by dominick on Fri Jun 25, 2010 2:41 pm

inspired... ahihihih
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Post by cholzee on Fri Jun 25, 2010 11:49 pm

aksidente lang yan hahaha! as in sobrang wala sa plano.. gusto ko nga gawing song eh kaso nakakatamad..

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Post by dominick on Sat Jun 26, 2010 6:16 pm

gawan mo lang ng melody yan, ok na Smile
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